WALT retell a story.
WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.
Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
- where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce
St Patricks real name is Patrick Mc Alpern. He was born somewhere in Britain. He didn't like school it was like a worm in his apple that's how much he didn't like school. When his mum said are you doing your homework he will just lay in his bed and say yes I'm nearly done. In sted of walking to school he went to the beach, he picked up tiny stones. When he was at the beach he was frozen he saw a black pirate ship they stole Patrick and all the over boys and girls in the village. The pirates sale Patrick to Ireland he was a shepherd he had to look after the sheep's and swine's. He had a dream and a voice said to him fast and pray when he woke up then he fasted and prayed he trusted God. Then he had a another dream he heard the same voice the voice said your ship is ready go the your ship he woke in the mid night he ran on the shore he saw a ship nearly leaving he got on the ship. The pirates liked Patrick on with them he talked about God a lot the pirates didn't care that much when a big storm came the ship smashed in to France the crew was starving "Where is your God Patrick dosnet he know that we are starving" said a pirate the Patrick prayed to God for help "Please God can you give us food can you make it quick so they will believe in you." Then wild pigs came out running to them and there was apples on a tree for dinner they had pork chops and apple sauce. Then he was a Priest, Bishop then a St
