Monday 8 June 2015

AUTUMN

I can see the cold ice in AUTUMN. The freezing cold ice is like your goner get made in to ice-creams. The leaves are yellow, Orange and red the leaves full on the cold wet grass. I like AUTUMN
Made By Flynn

Good poem, Flynn. Begin each new idea on a new line, like this:

I can see the cold ice in AUTUMN.
The freezing cold ice is like you are going to get made into ice creams.
The leaves are yellow, orange and red.
The leaves fall on the grass.
I like AUTUMN.